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| shy green rock 2008-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseUhm cute, but that's it...wow sorry, I don't mean to be mean. It's just that I sorta expected more! |
| atreyu love 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseaww. that is soo adorable :D |
| Trmpetplaya1 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseYou, my dear author, have a talent for one-shots. Wonderful story! (Although this is one of those that I'd LOVE to find out what happens afterward.) I liked Izzy's awkwardness and her feelings toward Jack--not just "omg, i love him he's so hot"; very realistic. Great work :) |
| iman1234 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseamazing make it a full story please its soo good |
| hippi926840 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseMOAR! GIMMEEH MOAR this is too sweet to remain a oneshot |
| Venus Smurf1 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written, though I admit that I wish there was more. Still, you're awesome! |
| YoursMarilyn 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI like it! Go Jack and how old is Izzy anyways? |
| Lauranthalsala 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseLove your writing but it doesn't feel like a one shot it feels like you could add so much omre onto the story, where some case comes up and she gets caught up in everything and there's the cop... and yeah, basically, it doesn't feel like a oneshot to me... but i LOVE the way you write, it's genius!! |
| Sam 2008-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMGAH that's so cute ^.^ |
| KY Silver Ribbon 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseLoved the story! I want my own Jack Goode, the sexy cop. [grin] The story was funny and extremely enjoyable. =) Cheers, Kasi |
| Faye 2008-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw This was cute. I enjoyed it. Maybe it could be a 2 page one shot? yes?...nno...? ..dang. |
| stained.eye 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abusewell, anyone who can create a story that uses the word "boogy" at least once and has to do with sexy cops, is amazing in my book. this was a really cute piece, and considering that i'm just as awkward as any girl in a social situation, i'm glad i've finally found a character that i share something in common with. wonderful job, dear! |
| wandless 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty good! You have a lot of talent. |
| luv me like no other 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abusethis is way too cute. i love it! |
| emerald 2008-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuse*SIGH* I want my own cop too! Wow, and the last sentence just had me drooling. Damned lucky girl. Cute story! And the Goode hot cop had a crush back on her! It was perfect, loved it! |