This one is not quite your normal writing style, but is beautiful nonetheless.

The bubbles match you darling!

Kiss kiss.

britani

Twee. Quaint.

Sometimes there could be better use of the new lines, since it doesn't rhyme anyway.

SoL

interesting. although i wish you wouldn't have mentioned that song...ugh, stupid pop music. but that's just my opinion.

your poem was nice but now i am thinking of that stupid pop song...try not to give away to your audience what it will be about. people will judge it before they read it. just a suggestion.

but nice job. keep writing. )

I think it's a cute poem, the last lines are good, I mean, it's as if you have a lot of confidence in who you love.