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| thepiemaster 2007-12-25 ch 2,  | abuseOh...who for art thou Zack? |
| Calliopenjo 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseGood short story |
| thepiemaster 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseI love love love love love this story idea. This chappy needs very little clean up, so here it goes (ha like the song!): 1. not sure if the expression is "all brains, no bronze." I don't think that bronze is the right word but I'm not sure. For now, let's leave it! 2. You should include the BG's (Band Geeks > |