I like how your work always inspires those feelings you describe. I don't just read them, I experience them, to some degree. And either the thesaurus is your best friend (grins) or you have an amazing vocabulary for a fifteen year old. At any rate, well done.

--Finwe

Your poems makes me want to write a poem. If only I was good at it. Awesome, again.

it's really neat.
your descriptions are not what i expected after reading a few others of yours that were pretty straightforward and a little regular,
so i was pleasantly surprised. (:
your imagery follows this theme that is almost haunting,
but the abstactness gives it a meaning other than
just: "darkness/etc..." (which can get a little cheesy).
so good job.
-ty.

Wow! Though maybe just a little too dark for me, extremely well-written as usual! Very nice!

After reading this, it gave me a new meaning yo life. Like mine could be a lot worse... Thanks ^^