Interesting, i like the simplicity and feeling in it. :)

Your other poetry is excellent as well, but I really love your haiku.
It's just so real.

~Illy

So tragic. So real. Just, there. Out in the open.
Regardless the length, it says enough as it is.

I really like this. It's simple but powerful. I also relate to that feeling. Peace.

Hey this is amazing. so much volume in so little words. This truly said alot to my heart. thanks for the reies, ghostgurl3

It seems you have a knack for this. =) Another very powerfully worded haiku to ponder. I do agree with Autumn Reflections, that somehow the last line could be better, but hey! Whoever said poetry was easy lied. (And one day, when I find that person...! hehe) Thank you again, and keep it up!

Art.

The last line seems to be missing a bit, but it works all the same.

Very rich in emotion.

I think haikus are my favourite for a couple reasons. for one thing, they're short and a quick read, but I think a lot of people don't realize how much work it is to create a really GOOD haiku: compression, or saying a lot with a few words. You've really done a fabulous job, congrats!

note: I'm not british / aulstrailian (sp, SORRY!) but I like spelling weird. it's only a U in most cases, right? ;)

It really got me thinking about some personal troubles in my life so far, but what does not kill me, may just do so in the end. (Ha got you!). Nice work.

Maggot.

Wow, 3 lines yet so much emotion was put into this poem! SO well done!

♥ Dreaming Chica♥

Thats a depresing thought...

You just said in three lines what I've tried to say in hundreds of words for three months. I must applaud you.

-stix-

We're always willing to second guess what people say to us that may seem harmful or hurtful at first glance, but not so much as we review it. We especially do this with people we hold dear to our hearts, regardless if we know them or not. This haiku conveys just that.

Congratulations, this was well thought out and done.

Interesting swing from line one to three. Well written haiku. MD:77.

I read your stuff a lot and this is the first time i comment because i think you deserve to know that i`m out there and that i really like what you write. But, man, you really get a lot of comments!! I guess a lot of ppl can see that your stuff is really good...unless you`re one of those attention-hungry people that reviews everyone with the same basic review so that she gets comments back... lol jk.
seriously, great work!!