 Follow The Pendulum 2007-12-23 . chapter 1I'll try to keep this review short because it's 1:42 am and I'll probably end up mashing random keys together. This is interesting. The different storylines/points of view is one of my favorite ways to tell a story. One problem I had was when Aya was sitting outside and mentioned the chattering of birds, but then said that it's awfully quiet. That just seemed...contradictory. This also reminds me of an anime called Kimi ga Nozomu Eien or Rumbling Hearts, but I think that's just because of the character named Mizuki :) I really wonder how this would have worked as a comic... |