I haven't looked at your stuff in so long. I think its been like a year. Yah but anyway, I like this alot. Especially the first line, it grabbed my attention right away. I dunno if this is more like lyrics rather than a poem, but I can definatly hear this being screamed in a song or something. I like that. Good job.

Great job expressing your feelings. Nice work.

Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

'It hurts to feel like not yourself'-- This could be rewritten because as is, it corrupts the flow quite well.
'It makes me no more worse'-- Double comparison! The word 'more' is not needed.
Overall, the raw emotion of this piece is somewhat off-putting, but then draws you back in.
-J.A.
Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).