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| Michael l'oeil fol 2008-01-22 ch 1,  | abusesid and nacey? must be after my time...either way the last part is potent...some of your odder work yet still conveying the same slashing critiques...lovely as ever...hope you recieved the message i sent back...i have very little pleasent to say about that pile of a machine at home. unfortunately im back in school, yet on a happier note back on my laptop as well. farewell and write on. Michael |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. I like the ending section the best and the ending line. It flows well. Nice work. Thanks for the review of my story "Punishing the Tormentor of the Starved". I really appreciate it. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| criti-sized 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseI can really express the impression this poem gave to me in one word: Wow. I like the distant emotion that you displayed in the poem and the words that you used to describe them, especially the ending. C.S. |