Yes, yes I've felt this. I like how little you used punctuation, because it left your poem with a sense of freedom, like floating on a breeze, which adds a bit to what you were saying, I think. It makes it that much more poignant that you are held back from attaining that oh-so-reachable goal. Keep it up!

Yeah, I can definitely relate.

I can relate as well.

^_^

I can most definitely relate. Very good- short, simple, and to the point, but you still do a great job expressing the tone and meaning! Love it.

a nice quick read.. keep writing!