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| simpleplan13 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot.. two beautiful images.. teh whole thing is I feel like that first line needs a verb like "theres frost on the branch) |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseVery pretty and nicely written. Great job and keep writing! -C.N |
| lupine-eyes 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI'm not partial to hiakus, but this is nicely written, very visual. |