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| Jamie Christine. 2007-12-22 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really beautifully written. Sometimes with rhymes poetry, people get too caught up in the writing and rhyming of it that they forget wwhat it is they were trying to espress, and it ends up sounding coarse and forced. This is very balanced and consistent. Love it. Keep up the good writing! |