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| Princess-anna57 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is gorgeous. :) Great message. Very heartfelt too. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Ayx 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseHaha...this looks like something pulled right out of my mind. I can so see myself standing on the beach and looking out feeling the beauty around me and knowing I have that same beauty in me. Powerful piece...well for me personally. Ayx |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI'll bet you're a cutie. Well said here. I enjoyed the read, and if I don't hear from you until then, have a good Christmas. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |
| Sonora the free 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was really great Julian! Oh, I put up a newer piece. ...yeah...you kinda reminded me to start posting. So, |
| sylvia's syndrome 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI like the simplicity of this piece, and I think the honesty is admirable. I liked your choice of the word “tattling.” The only thing I really didn’t care for was the way the entire poem except the last line was centered. I almost missed that very important last line because I didn’t notice it over in the corner after all my attention was brought to the center. Keep up the good work! |