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| effervescent-sentiments 2008-02-26 ch 1,  | abuseFirst stanza is a fragment, and that bugs me a bit. Add some relevant verbs, please. Love the last stanza. |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseHmm... I liked this, it being short helped capture the sadness I think. I think the final line was a little bit average after such pretty lines, but perhaps you meant it that way. Interesting idea anyway. ~the Stranger in thr moonlight |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abusesad and beautiful piece... I love the whole rose imagery... awesome piece |
| MissRiddle 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseNice poem, it's very sad (but that's good). |