Ohmygosh!
My heart ACTUALLY MELTED.
So so beautiful. Ah

this story is so good.
the beginning was funny,
but her 2nd confession nearly made mr cry!
its soo sweet.

This story had been what your intentions were--making your readers giddy because I sure am giddy from it now. I just love it. But there are some typos. Other than that, it's quite close to perfection. I couldn't criticize because it's so very good--you know, what they say about a good review should contain both negative and positive so that it'll be balanced. But, I'm sure writing a dangerously ionic review. ;)

your story is so cute; I just love it. =)

HEY!
Well, you succeeded. :) You made me happy and giddy lol. And I really want snow now, I never realised how much I loved snow :P Probably not the aim of the story but still.
Any-who, have a good week!
Thanks for the story. :)
BYE!!
x x x

aw! gosh i wish that would happen in real life. :( stupid age limits...

That's cute ^.^

Absolutely darling. Cute and fluffy. Great characters and extremely unique idea.

That was SO cute!

:) Favorited.

this is so randomly sweet!
i love it!

How cute!

That was the best Xmas one-shot ever!!

Great work,
E.

Yes, it's very fluffy, but it was so cute! It brought tears to my eyes! I loved it! Not many people could have come up with an idea like this! GREAT GREAT GREAT!
Love, Dani

wow, really nice and a smooth read :)
i especially liked the part where santa felt her up, it suited my dirty mind .. hehe... the end however, was a little too full of cheesy lines in my opinion, still very well written and a very interesting plot
greetZ

I love this story!

aww...lovely! I really liked it--cliche and all! ^.^