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| She-Loves-Someone 2005-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a very dark peace, but I do enjoy it. The flow is excellent except for a few choppy parts, and I think you should write much more! Kudos!~~DemiDemocratik, head cheerleader w/ the Bedford Stars! We're dynamite! Woo! |
| DuelShocker56 2001-07-19 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness! Don't do suicide please! It's not worth it. I know how you feel. I have been picked on my whole life. But don't worry, things will get better I know they will. Tell a counsaler or your parents if this is really bothering you. I know you don't liked to be picked on, and I can tell it is really bothering you. But think of all the things in life that you will miss because you won't be around. And your friends would be devestated. You don't want your friends to be sad do you? Just follow your heart. And someday, those people picking on you will grow up and stop. You'll see. Just keep holding on, and you will be okay. I promise you that. |
| Dark Angel Of Retribution 2001-05-05 ch 1, | abuseErm, 'kay! It's... interesting. Why? Why not. The same reason for anything, Why not?! |