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| MegTheStrange 2008-05-12 ch 1,  | abuseI liked this. though it could have been a little longer. |
| xdemonsintheskyx 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseOh my godsh I luffs it. Amazingly tragic...true love at its most tragic. amazing. |
| broken-and-bruised 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseo my god that was amazing. you put so much feeling into and i almost cried at the almost end |
| SummerBaby94 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseit's very very bittersweet, and actually kind of depressing... but it just works. i'm not sure how, but you made this work amazingly. |
| heartfeltlove 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseAw... Why did he have to kill himself... Is their a possibility of him magically coming back to life? |
| Alenor 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseit's not at all cheerful. why didn't he just move away or something? there's no need to kill himself. |
| cyanidecandy 2007-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethis story is really sweet, great work. loved it ! |
| simplicity is complex 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abusei like. |
| Lily's Sushi 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abusehey. haha, i don't even know you. i like it better than your other stories, because the others are really focused on dialogue, which isn't always that important. in this one, the narration is just better- talks about setting, real emotions, etc. it felt rushed; a lot happened. and you could edit it more, add more detail. but the girl is believeable- low self esteem and all. i can definitely relate to that. even though it's sort of cliche, i like it. i mean, what girl doesn't like a good romance story, right? and i like "i'm gonna be someone." i have to remind myself that pretty frequently. :) |