It was really nice. My chinese isn't the best and i read simplified, but I liked it. Even if it is choppy.

That was great! :)
这是一件巨大歌曲诗事 我祝愿我知道敲打对此。 那是整洁的。 不幸地，我不，但是那是好的，因为我无论如何真正地享用了此 我认为流程是正派地好的。 这是在我的眼睛的艺术品。

~Rébecca
~丽贝卡

Nice. 不，应该用华文说：写得很好！

Wens..

You are an effective bilingual.. LOL. Anyhows, I enjoyed reading the lyrics, it was simple, but yet the emotion shows through. Good one =)