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| WeAreBroken 2008-01-20 ch 1,  | abuseI love the normality of it. Nice job. |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 ch 26, | abuseWow. All done - you did it! I'm speechless. I love it - you told her complete story in twenty-six insightful chapters... and you managed to put so much meaning into each chapter despite the barriers! Keep writing!! ~Daughter of Music |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 ch 15, | abuseBooks. Libraries. Two of my most favorite things in the world. Need I say more? I love this chapter! ~Music |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 ch 13, | abuseAgain, I love the information about what sort of person she is: shy, quiet, the type not many notice, and yet the type who notices everyone else. ~DoM |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 ch 9, | abuseM. Favorite chapter. It gives you more information about her character: "Interestingly enough this girl is none of these" - I like her! I can picture her... ~DoM |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 ch 8, | abuseI loved this chapter; the part about "Her invisibility proved to be useful, at least no one saw her fall". It's what I feel like a lot of the time. (If you read my "Invisible to You" poem, it will explain more why I like this chapter). Keep it up!! I know I always say this! but really, do! ~Daughter of Music |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 ch 7, | abuseOne comment: well, two actually. One: "minuet" should be "minute", should it not? Two: You are amazing. Keep it up! Three: never mind, I forgot. Umm... keep writing! Nothing else to say! ~Daughter of Music |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 ch 4, | abuseWow. This must take so much concentration, to try and write something like this... Question: Do you mind if I borrow the idea and write my own A-Z poem? Feel free to say no... I don't want to feel like a copycat... or become an annoyance... ~Daughter of Music |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseWhat a creative idea!! I love it - I'm going on to B now... ~Daughter of Music |
| parker pen 2008-01-05 ch 7, | abuseA challenge, indeed... You have risen victorious. For that... I salute you! |
| Imperia 2008-01-04 ch 26, | abusei think you did really well with this poem. good job! ^^ |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-04 ch 26, | abuseI think its slightly cheating, but its a nice end to the piece |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-04 ch 25, | abuseI love the second part of hte first line... nicely done |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-04 ch 24, | abusethis is an interesting way to use X.. I like it a lot |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-04 ch 23, | abuseI really love the second line.. the rest of it is nice too |