Ah, thats a cute ending to an awesome story.

Oh good stuff. Im glad the curse got lifted.

I like the story a lot. You seem to know a lot about pack dynamics and wolves in general. Good use of human traits and ideas in the wolves.

Good stuff. Im glad they got help and that thorns brother warned them about the comming attack. Why are they dieing out? I cant believe that two packs have gone down to such a small amount. Update soon so I can find out what happens next.

Oh good stuff. who that wolf be the old wolf that died? Or is it the bad one? Hmm. guess i have to wait and find out. update soon.

aww . . . so good! yah! Vetis please dont die! um . . . CANT WAIT FOR MORES

This was a really good chapter. Im happy they were able to help thorn, but i dont think they should have taken all of the worriors with them.

Oh this was good stuff. Too bad so many had to die. I hope that everyones alright and that thorn and vetis make it to somewhere safe and can help defeat hellfire. update soon

awsome chapter! ^.^ so sad though . . . * sigh* cant wait for more 0.0 this reminds of a book called The Sight have you read it??

awsomeful!! ^.^ hehe Glimmer and Mut!

good stuff. i hope they can find enough food to go around.

wonderfull story!1 acually I erad this a while ago and have been waiting for the next opart so i thought i would review ^.^

AWESOME!

I think you should do a story on how thunder faught the shadow wolves. too that would make a good story.

I really like this story i hope it continues.