The first two lines are so, fuzzy. Yet the last line, highlights something we all forget, by using a nice play of words. Wonderfully crafted, I feel so warm.

Hey Chidori, yes, it's been a long while.. Glad to see you again. :) Sorry it took so long for me to reply.

As for the piece here,
It's a true classic. The last line is such an strong impact - I really like the honesty of it. Well done, as always.

Wonderful images that capture the season perfectly and I love the rhythm. To me poetry is like music. Also I'm seeing a lighter side to you. Nicely done, Chi.
Catalan'

I like this.. its short and sweet and the last line is very true although often forgotten

...is it a holy day? of Sol or Christ?

nice...

Nice. Beautiful image and emotion conveyed. I wish I could get myself into this frame of mind.

Peace, Doc