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| LaylaLivesLoosely 2008-05-11 ch 15, | abuseAh! I love this! I laughed out loud so many times. I love Luce and Greg's hotness... and the kids are adorable! i realy hope to see more soon =] |
| Sychaeus 2008-05-11 ch 15, | abuseoh, love. love, love, love. A adore this, and the previous one, so very much. Seriously. Monsters are amazing, and this is done so weel. And the puns. In the dialogue and in the writing. I'm going to faint, you know. -Sy |
| Rayne 2008-05-10 ch 7, anon. | abuseAhahaha God. Greg's so oblivious is adorable. Love it. |
| ChibKo 2008-05-08 ch 15, anon. | abuseZOMG! Cliffhanger?! I was so wrapped in the story that when I saw there were no more chapters.. it made me sad. |
| meri 2008-05-07 ch 15, anon. | abusei just stumbled across your story and am enjoying it immensely. greg is cute and clueless and so very dangerously sexy. luce is possessive and hot and so very in lust with greg. i can't wait for the auction! arvel should buy him, that would sit well with luce. |
| Zebbie 2008-05-04 ch 15, | abusePersonally, I think you should have at least double the number of reviews that you do have. Your humour is spot on. You play with cliches without getting bogged down by them and falling into a sticky quagmire of sweet. Greg is a brilliant character. I eagerly await the next chapter. Zeb |
| gummybaby 2008-05-02 ch 15, | abuseIt took me a couple of days, but I got though the 15 chapters of this story, giggling gleefully I might add. I love monsters, all of them, and I can't wait for an update! |
| Wings937 2008-05-01 ch 15, anon. | abuseWow, I love this story! It's absolutely hilarious and wonderfully written, and it's practically a crime that it doesn't more reviews on FP. I adore Greg and Lucian; they are both so cute . . . Oh, and I love the pets, but I *am* partial to (evil) cats. ^^ Actually, all the characters are well-developed and very likeable. The pace of the story is also very good. It's wonderful to see the characters getting to know and warming up to each other. Anyway, thank you for writing this. Totally made my finals week. I really hope you update soon! |
| chiclet318 2008-04-29 ch 15, anon. | abuseI seriously love this story. Just happened to find this story. I really like the characters and I'm completely wrapped up in this story. Everything is so original and new! please keep updating |
| demonrubberducky 2008-04-29 ch 15, | abuseOh my, two chapters at once! It's my lucky day! I can't wait for the next chapter (and hopefully the charity auction. Luce isn't participating, and Greg magically gets volunteered? No, that's not a bit suspicious!) The picture I get in my head of Luce's glass-shattering bird call is Fawk's war cry from Harry Potter and the Dark Lord Waldemart...I don't know if you've seen it, but it's hilarious (although the temporary picture of Luce I have in my head is now some guy in a bird suit...) Yeah, off topic...sorry. You're witty and wonderful, so update soon and don't make us readers wait for our daily dosage of monster puns. |
| bluescar 2008-04-29 ch 15, anon. | abuseOkay, you know I love this story. It just keeps on getting better. I had my suspicions that Arvel was the familiar magic, but I didn't think you you would bring him in so soon. I loved the molestation. Poor Greg. His self esteem is so low he can't see that Luce is crazy over him, though I am getting the impression that there is more to it than simply like at first sight. Either way, as always you did a great job and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| ManIACjAcKaL 2008-04-29 ch 15, | abuseAh, I just love this story so much! Amazing! Simply can't wait for an update. :) |
| Curb Crasher 2008-04-28 ch 15, | abuseWell . . . Greg is Greg, and I love him for it. I kept thinking, "Bad, Arvel! Bad!" throughout this entire chapter. I'm not really happy with him. . . . He hurt Greg! T_T |
| Curb Crasher 2008-04-28 ch 14, | abuse"Can't bother with names" and then names three off the top of his head. . . . XD And Emma's the cutest thing ever! Now . . . I'll move along to the next chapter. . . . |
| nonaccount 2008-04-28 ch 15, | abuseI guess I'll have to wait for the bachelor auction scene. Oh well, I'm just glad Luce came and momentarily diffused the situation. Although, Arvel was expecting it . . . so not sure what that means. Can't wait for the next update. |