arg! You can't just leave us there!

I utterly despise the person who created cliffhangers.

I hope you'll update soon!

That...was so damn amazing, i can even begin to say how much i loved this.

Can't wiat for you to update!

Poor, poor Greg.

He's in for it now! Keep writing!

please, please, please update soon. please!

um...

it's really good. which brings us back to the update plea.

Blood sugar haha poor Greg maybe he will finaly realize his feelings for Luce now. :) I love this story. beautiful filled with puns and laughter and just the right amount of bad guys and full fill marshmellow monsters. It surprises me and makes me think about all those cartoon i used to watch when i was younger... Good Job

Wow, I do have to say that I loved this. I've never really read anything so... I don't know how to put it... Exhilarating.

I would love to read more, so don't be a stranger about updating!

k so i'll have you know that your story's made me put off several hours of studying, so thank you for that. _

no, seriously, i love this haha. update soon.

I read FrankInLove about a week ago and loved it and I have to say that I like this story even better. I love the relationship between Luce and Greg and how it's progressing, not to mention the countless terrible (and strangely wonderful) puns in this story. I can't wait to read what happens next, too funny! Great job!

Just finished reading this all today! It's wonderful, I love how much detail you've put into creating the universe. I wasn't sure how much I would like it at first (vampires aren't really my thing, and some of it seemed kind of flip at first), but your characters are intriguing and as the story progressed things started to develop. You've been able to create everything in a believable way in a world that sounds like it could exist, without being over the top or falling victim to disney characterization.

I'm glad I gave it a chance, it's excellent now that you've rounded things out, and I especially enjoy the little jokes and digs, like the sweetch's mention of the wandering kids in the oven? It's given everything a realistic aspect, which I definitely appreciate.

I'll be looking forward to more, I hope you're still writing!

NO! how could you stop there? i want more of greg kissing luce! _ it's 4am now, i read your story for the better part of the day, eschewing breaks and risking the wrath of my boss since accessing non-work related sites are strictly forbidden (i rushed home after clocking out for the day so i can read the rest of it, that's how much i liked it!), i demand that greg do more than kiss him! ::grins::

seriously, though, i love this story. i won't *really* demand that you update. i know writing takes time. but i'll be crossing my fingers that you'll post the next part soon. real soon. all my fingers. prolly my brother's too. so i hope you feel inspired. pretty please with blood sugar on top? :D

Ouh! I love thise! It's so funny and all the jokes fit perfectly! I can't wait for you to update! It's so awesome!

Ah, as wonderful and convoluted as always. You have inspired me to write my own monster fic . . . if I can think of a plot, that is.

OH MY GOSH! XD about time they kissed! Terribly sad that it was sugar (oh the irony) induced...

I cannot wait to read more (but I guess i'm going to have to)

I loove this story, this and the prequel thingy FrankInLove (I think that was the name, I'm horrible with names XD)

You write really well and I laugh so much when I read it!

Update soon!

Wowwee! Just read this in two days while avoiding CRUNCHING deadlines at work. I love this story, Greg is my favourite super freak and well I kindasortainlove with Luce. Thanks for a great story. Its always good to read something that is so well thought out and excecuted! Can't wait for the next installment!

The first fic of yours I read was Sparrow on LJ, and then I found your account over here. I grabbed a bottle of Snapple and a poptart, sat down in front of my laptop, and prepared to be there for a long, long time.