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| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThe symbolism in this poem is just great, its amazing, and there's absolutely nothing I would change. The rhyme scheme is nice, too. --SB, review marathon |
| Jenneration 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. I really don't know what else to say. Quite frankly, you could describe me as "speechless" right now. That was simply amazing. Wonderful. Breathtaking (hence the speechlessness). :) I loved every part of that poem. I think it's great how you can compare a caged bird and a freed bird to what Martin Luther King Jr., and everyone else in that time frame, went through. I hope you win that contest, because this poem is truly amazing. I'm sorry I can't go into any detail... all I can say is... Wow. Keep writing, Heartbeat Like Thunder This is going on my favorites :) |