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| xxInsanityxx 2008-02-29 ch 1,  | abuseI love this poem, I LOVE THE TWILIGHT SERIES, and edward cullen =) lol, my favorite part is "He loves you and he’s beautiful He’s yours and he’s beautiful He’s mine and he’s beautiful" its very poetic =) the one part i dont understand is the "Going, it's beautiful" love the poem ~xxInsanityxx |
| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseaw i love the Twilight series :) the repitition of the word "beautiful" doesn't even get old, its nice! great job. --SB, review marathon |
| Jenneration 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseBy the second line in the first stanza, I knew it was Edward Anthony Masen Cullen :) Then I cheated and skipped to the memo. XD But, but, I did go back and reread the poem. I liked how you did stress the word "beautiful", because that is exactly what Edward is... perfect. I don't even believe in perfection, yet, for Edward, I believe in it. Edward, although a "monster" to himself, will always be beautiful. A beautiful heart, mind, body, and... soul ;) A great poem like always :) Heartbeat Like Thunder P.S. I used to be Silent-Rebel. I know, I haven't reviewed or logged in in ages, but I couldn't help it for this poem... and Edward :) Keep writing! |
| girl without wings 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseThe word “beautiful” in this piece is used so much that one would think by the end it would be worn out and annoying, but you did a great job keeping it fresh and not dragging the poem out for too long. Keep writing! |