“Miss Davies, I assure you that you are being dismissed all we want is your opinion of the company.” should be "... I assure you that you are NOT being dismissed. All we want is your opinion of the company."

its a really cute story

I have to say, this was a nice, long, sweet one-shot :) Great job on it. I thought it was rather sweet the entire way through... except for the very last bit, actually. I personally thought that Hale was a pretty big ** when it came to letting Amanda stay at his place, and on the same lines, I felt that Byrne was way too forgiving throughout the entire thing. I would've thought that she'd call Hale out on it a long time ago since she seems to have a very biting personality... or at least it seemed like she did in the very beginning.

But other than that, I thought this was great :) I just felt quite indignant on Byrne's behalf. Cheers on a job well done!

Yay! Cute! Have I told you that I love every single one of your stories? I think I have, but whatever... they're purely AMAZING. Keep writing PLEASSE :]

aw this was soo cute! loved it

Very good.
I liked how the met, and the ending was good.
Good job

Cute~ ♥ I liked it and enjoyed it a lot! The plot is really, really funny and cute and they're sio lovely together. ^^
Awesome! And Happy New Year!

I like their banter :p Good job!

Uhm...Amanda revealed everything because she wanted the glory of saying that she was a ** for doing it? Hey, it's possible. xD

Anyway, nice one-shot. Very amusing. =)

this story isn't really weird, but it's more cute and quirky. (: I do think Amanda spilling everything is a bit off, but other than that, this works. (: Super duper writing, and same goes for the characters and plot. (: Awesome addition from woodstock1969 to our c2. (: