Reviews for heathen verse - FictionPress.com

she smolders 2008-01-06 ch 1,	abuseYour verse brings a smile of sorts to my own face because there's a certain bitter irony to this. And what you say is so true. Take care.
Julius Gillian 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseYou may think your life is meaningless or your existence irrelevant or whatever, but you have a powerful knack for poetry. You write with strength, courage, and deliberation. This sounds like something you'd march to, or something to inspire armies morale. I really liked this. noses angling up like dulled devil horns' That is a beautifuly ironic line, like one of your reviewers pointed out. Cool deal, keep it up.
Moondog Dozier 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuseMarvelous word choice and conceptualization. The last line really brings it home well. Great write.
simpleplan13 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuseI love that simile its awesome... great piece
Basara 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseI know that you are pointing through this... hehe... nice...
fairytale failure 2007-12-24 ch 1,	abuseI like the image of 'noses angling up like dulled devil horns'. It's a cute irony. I smiled at the end, too; the poets seem so much more real, don't they. This piece is short, but no words were wasted - it was so full of imagery.