so i figured i'm probably inundating your mailbox with alerts round about now. but hey! that's what readers who review are for, right?

i love the way you write.

Em

I like it! Bravo! Brava! what ever it is those people shout when they enjoy something! lol

I likey it =)

its cool, i like it

You’ve been saying’ that ever since you went to that big old ‘apple.” Fred insisted, “I can’t say I blame ya that much either. I would a gone with ya if that lazy bum, Hank, wasn’t so damn lazy!” I laughed and she laughed with me, but the amusement drained from her face and the seriousness returned. “Sweetie, you’re sure about this? I’ve heard that Chicago’s a tough place.”


the big old apple is NYC...not Chicago..unless you were refering to NYC

lolz, i just took a trip to Alabama, and so far i like the story very much. its interesting, and i cant wait to see what goes on. its moving at a good pace, and you have good character developmet. keep it up, update soon!