Sorry, that was me having nothing to say! Wow, Shelly, dear that was really good! Gee! I think I figured out what is so really good about them. Okies, so when you start, you describe everything really well for a start, amazingly well! But you use all these gorgeous, beautiful words with you know, beautiful and innocent connotations. Then, as soon as you have the event where everything kind of switches and turns around, you still describe everything perfectly, but everything changes to these dark, twisted words. And then, the juxtaposition of the two different types of words, its just really unsettling, especially because the switch is so sudden and unexpected and at the end you’re just like *speechless* “Wow”
*shiver* “Col!”

And there you go! I think that’s how it works, of course, I’m probably totally wrong! The point is, it’s really good, and YAY! It was a long review, I know you love reviews!
~Love Ashlei~

That's so sad. It was filled with emotions. I wonder what Parker would've thought of it.

Wow. That gave me goosebumps.

I used to be able to criticize, but now I really lack anything to criticize...lol. I love the foreshadowing you use in your titles and how you always manage to twist things around, this is why you're on my author alert, you keep me on my toes! Great job again! ^^

~The Blind Trombonist