|Reviews for Call it Love|
| dragonflydreamer 5/24/09 . chapter 1
I love the rhyme in this. The way you make it both internal and external gives it a strong rhythm, and also a bit of a punch behind the words.
I also like your use of parentheses. By contrasting the style of them, you really make them feel like afterthoughts.
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| fatbird33 10/12/08 . chapter 1
i liked the things in parentheses. good technique.