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| Faith Adeline 2008-02-07 ch 4,  | abuseI like where this is going, and it's so original! Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-08 ch 4, | abuseInteresting addition. The dialogue is good. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-05 ch 3, | abuseVery interesting characters. Fantastic work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-05 ch 2, | abuseYou made me want to cry for Wendy. Great job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abusePoor Wendy. Adrian definitely isn't Prince Charming. This is pretty original. I like the screwed up characters. Lovely work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| the big crunch 2007-12-27 ch 4, | abusei am still so in love with the dialogue. i really like slightly and peter is just... moody, so far, at least. :):):):) |
| the big crunch 2007-12-26 ch 3, | abusethey ate rat? ew, haha, the dialogue kept me smiling all through it, |
| the big crunch 2007-12-25 ch 2, | abusei love the details and the word pyjamas (or how you spell it) i could picture the whole few scenes and they gave me... that feeling... ugh, i dont know what it is! im braindead right now. like tingles! |
| the big crunch 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseit's different. a good dirfferent, and i like it. |
| sweden 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseooh nice start, i'm looking forward to it :) adrian seemed to be like jackie boy from sin city. |