Scary, weird, sent shivers down my spine. It was intresting.

Interesting word choice. Wanton Anchoress? What is the "chalk home?" (Are cloisters made of chalk?) It's an interesting take on a rationale for becoming a nun... although I think in this case you would have hoped that the priest would realize that this person should find another way to be more bold instead of becoming a nun. It's not really becoming a nun that she wants. aw. Your fondness for archaic words makes me smile.

Sonnets can be extremely difficult to use effectively, and I think you’ve done a really nice job. The rhyme didn’t twist your message, which is something I see happen quite a lot. Congratulations on a job well done. Keep up the good work!