Oh! My! Gosh! This is absolutely hilarious! Poor frederick! I love this wordplay 'Dammsel in distress'... when I first read the title I thought I misread it... love it! Please write more like this!

Some amount of realism will do your story good. Your story seems to exist purely for the sake of poking fun at fairy tales. That is fine, but the reader will not be interested if there is not a realistic underlying theme(s). Too much description in the first few paragraphs, try to cut down on that.

I love the backstory being transmitted via dream. Even if it is a story meant for laughs, there's also some seriousness in there as well and I love it. I'm sorry that my reviews aren't more...constructive. Currently I'm just not in the right state of mind. Oh well; I can't wait to read more!

Ohmygosh, that last bit had me hollowing! I love this story SO MUCH. I must read more.

Oh man, poor Frederic! xD Prince Ulrich is just a *tad* blumbering and in denial...

This was hilarious!Poor,poor Frederic.Getting shoved into a corset and heels is definitely no fun.

Unless you're not the one in them! XD

I laugh at Frederic's attempts to get out of this. Stupidity always wins against rationality.

I think this is one of the best stories I've read on this site in a while. I hope you update it soon, because I'm totally in love with it :D

Okay, so I think I peed a little in my pants while reading this. Ulrich is my favorite so far. He's just so stupidly oblivious that I can't help but love him.

I can't wait for the moment when it finally penetrates Ulrich's thick skull that Frederic is a boy and will continue to be a boy. I can just imagine so many different ways he could react.

Fantastic story!
-Nub

hilarious that's one word I would use to describe this delicious piece of fiction.
I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
I do hope you would update, but I know what writer's blocks like and if you don't quite feel you're up to writing that fine.
the Prince seems a little to airhead-ish but that's what makes it so funny. No offend? Okay, so far it's coming along.
Really liked it, been a while since I've found a worthy story to review. Loved the twist to fairy tale, just to let you know I simply love to read slash fairy tales, now I 'm just droning on, so
Keep up the work, I would simply

I love this story, it is a great twist on the fairy tales. Can't wait for more.

-Jensun

This story is truly charming! It's so cute, delightful and HILARIOUS. I can't help but laugh, the animal's part was just too funny! And gosh, the characters... They're loveable and utterly brilliant. I love Frederic's humour, and his obsession with cleanliness, and how not love Ulrich? Poor guy. He looks the kind of person who's to good for the world. I kidan... Pity him, except I don't, really. I'm so anxious to know what will happen, continue, please!

Rofl! This is great :D

awesome thanks for the update! looking forward to more!

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DH

Really, really fun ! :D