 Sagaciouspnay 2008-02-26 . chapter 1i know this feeling perfectly well and you put it greatly in this poem. i love the ending how you end with the need of comfort. a very comforting poem. i miss reviewing your works! please keep writing. splendid job in this poem! :) |
 Steel Winged Angel 2008-01-20 . chapter 1Short and sweet. Very nice. |
 simpleplan13 2007-12-24 . chapter 1I like this.. the repetition of maybe is great and I love ideas that you state about what to do to feel better.. nciely done |
 sylvia's syndrome 2007-12-24 . chapter 1Simple work but nice all the same. I think you handled the rhyming nicely. It doesn’t sound too contrived, which is something that’s quite easy to do. Keep up the good work! |