Hi! Your story is really cool! i cant wait for more ^_^ seems like a fast paced story =) keep it up!

Wow! So cool. Kind of creepy too. Kizu is hilirious. I like his retorts and his reactions. Haha, its a good laugh in the middle of the suspense and all. :) Good job!

I haven't seen or read Death Note either, but bloody this is great! Your writing style has surely improved now onto a greater stage. Ah! Now I wish I could write more like you! After reading this I know I'll have to work more on my writing, hah. Anyways, this chapter was very smooth flowing with excellent details and has the sound of a dectective movie! My mind is really anticipating to read more. It's really good work. I think one of your best. So please continue on!

P.S: I like how you sparkled French stuff in the story. It makes it more unique. :-)

YAY! I really like the start! I love how you made the characters talk--it gives you a view of their personality in a very cool manner. Altogether I'm really looking forward to this. I love these kind of stuff. So much mystery, betrayal and action in the air! My heart just starts pumping faster. Great start Misty! I'm really really looking forward to what you have in stored!