saddness.. a few gramatical errors as usual lol jk. but good, this just proves that u cannot keep up a sharide without consicunses lol.

well thatr was very. . .um. . .diffrent. . .were you in a hurry writting it cause the tenses are diffrent at some points and so is the POV like it said him and the me in the same sentance. . .and there was some spelling mistakes. . .but other than that the plot is coming along nicely. . .then again who am I to talk about your mistakes. . .you've read my stuff so I'm sure you know how horrid I can type. . .

hm intresting. . .as for what I've been upto nothing really. . .as for updates i have updated some of my stuff but I've got writters block and a bunch of stuff is going on right now. . .anyways I'll put this on story alert. . .

oh my f**king god!! damn is that good. i think that a good name for her would be something like chrystal because of how you described her eyes, they seem so luminous and like chrystals that change color depending on where you look at it and how the colors show through when you hold it up in the sunlight. i really think that this chapter was awesome and i really like the way Wayne can take Karen's verbal abuse & how he doesnt care. his additude is very layed back & cool. (i dont think i spelled additude right. XD)