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| JtheChosen1 2008-09-10 ch 31,  | abusegreat work here! |
| Paige Evans 2008-05-24 ch 31, | abuseOh, my God. I'm finished. And I'm speechless. And you're brilliant. I cried my way through the last few chapters. I loved it. -Paige |
| Ty Taco 2008-04-29 ch 31, | abuseYou will get a longer review from me on chapter thirty. I just...can't review right now. I don't want you to hate me. If I reviewed now...you would. I am so angry I am surprised I can even sound somewhat civil with you. lol You killed Robbie. You killed Noa. You killed Delia. For all intents and purposes you killed Alex. AND You brought Bane back. You are one of the few authors with big enough balls to write reality in fantasy. Where in the end...evil always prevails. Which I'm sorry to say...happened in this novel. I would have liked a happy ending. That is why I read. To escape the fact that...in real life...there are no happy endings. But all your book did was remind the audience that no matter what happens...evil always wins. hahahahaha I loved it. Truly did. I'm just...sad. That you would end it on such a realistic note. But whatever. GLad you wrote it. Amazing series. Trying to decide whether to read the spin-off or not. Maybe if there is a happy ending you can convince me. xoxoxo, Ty |
| Ty Taco 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseNice little flashback. I like Mama Marybeth. :] Hope she comes into play in this installment I do. That was my best attempt at Yoda. xoxoxo, Ty |
| pfeiffer 2008-02-21 ch 31, | abuseso it ends... it's kind of bittersweet... GREAT WORK! is there going to be a part 4 on the series? because it would seem that Bane is inside Caleb... |
| Drew85 2008-02-19 ch 30, | abuseSighs, wonder if Alex is relaxing or trying to communicate with robbie if he can talk or sense dead people. So I guess Hawke and Caleb were bad guys after all? |
| Wolverinefactor 2008-02-19 ch 31, | abusewtfbbq. gah *dies* |
| Wolverinefactor 2008-02-19 ch 30, | abusegreat way to end it. coptart is fecking brilliant. |
| Wolverinefactor 2008-02-19 ch 29, | abuseBattle was how I expected but good none the less. I can see perhaps a new sequel down the road... |
| Wolverinefactor 2008-02-19 ch 28, | abuseGreat chapter, very good fight scene, one of your most focused ones yet. and bah you love killing your peeps. |
| Wolverinefactor 2008-02-17 ch 27, | abuseMean... Just mean... cool fight, grand ending and then... I have to wait for the finale :'( |
| Drew85 2008-02-17 ch 27, | abuseGood cliffe, can't wait to read about the rest of the battle. got Noa is so cocky. |
| pfeiffer 2008-02-17 ch 26, | abusewhere's the war? wa... you and your cliffies... |
| Wolverinefactor 2008-02-15 ch 26, | abuseloved the stuff between noa and audrey. and whose the old man. wtf is going on. awesome chapter. can't wait and this blows the hell out of the shit devil may cry 4 was shoving down my throat for the past 2 days. |
| Wolverinefactor 2008-02-13 ch 25, | abusegood chapter. it's all coming to a head. Curious as to if you'll kill off anyone else... We now have 2 peeps in big poo. |