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| JustSomeGirl07 2008-01-04 ch 2,  | abusewow this is great! Im on the edge of my seat now, want to know more :) xx |
| Corina 2007-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just happened to google my own name and this turned up...interesting to know there's actually a character in a book with my exact name. I wish the best of luck to the writer...cheers. |
| kittyluvr1 2007-12-25 ch 2, | abuseGood start to your story, it would be interesting to read about Mitchell's discovery about his wife. |
| Sophie Stone 2007-12-25 ch 2, | abuseOh, this is going to be a good one! I really like it. You have an awesome style. Only thing I can think of for a critique would be to vary some phrases, there were a couple in there that you repeated a few times. But very good! |