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PrincessNancy 2008-03-18 ch 15,	abuseI like this story; It's really well-written, everything especially the nicknames part, you gotta love 'em! So, did Anna finally figure her own nickname for Tim? You never mentioned it. Although I like this story, as in really like the story, I felt it was abrupt, since you put it in the romance genre, you should have prolly written a chapter or more describing Anna and Tim. If you ever consider rewriting the story, please expand it. :) This one really rocks. :P XoXo NAN!
Gwendolyn Erskine 2008-03-10 ch 15,	abuseYay, you finished! And it was EXCELLENT! I liked how you ended it too- I always have such trouble with endings. And I definitely understand what you mean about knowing a character as well as your friends. Because if you think about it, once you start writing a story, they BECOME people. People with pasts and futures, likes and dislikes... One thing I've been curious about since the beginning of the story is what Anna's story is about. But either way, congratulations on a great story! I'm looking forward to reading more of what you have to write. :) ~Gwen
AndstillIRise 2008-03-09 ch 15,	abuseI know the stories done and you mainly wrote this for your friends, but I really liked it. sometimes people write books and they don't mean anything, they don't teach you anything, but this one did and I think it was a pretty important lesson. peace
Divinefallacy 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseI'm intriuged by Anna. She might have problems but there is something definitely deeply analytical about her - and in turn, about you - because you built her. Well, I could be wrong, but surely I would love to read more updates as and when you write them. Loved what I read.
Chasmal 2008-01-25 ch 11,	abuseI like how she dealt with Abe, and I'm glad she didn't let him get to her. Anna's a very level-headed character, and it's refreshing. And I enjoyed how Tim could find something in her name that Anna couldn't, even though she's the one who has always loved names. It will be interesting to see where their relationship goes.
Gwendolyn Erskine 2008-01-20 ch 10,	abuseFirst, I just have to say that I LOVE this story. If it gets long enough you could submit it to a publisher. Seriously. Second, I have to say that I, personally, am in favor of "the road less traveled." :) Keep writing and I'll be reading! ~Gwen
DeceptionIsMySpecialty 2008-01-04 ch 9,	abuseHey, Really liked this chapter. I totally fell in love with the car. It's gorgeous. I really like the easy banter between Tim and Anna. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! XOXO, DeceptionIsMySpecialty
Chasmal 2007-12-31 ch 9,	abuseYour writing definitely flows well, and I found myself laughing quite a few times throughout the story so far. Nice character development, I feel like each one has a seperate personality.
DeceptionIsMySpecialty 2007-12-29 ch 8,	abuseI'm back, are you excited? :) Anywho, I really liked this chapter. I thought the whole argument between Tim and his brother was pretty realistic. Oh, and I love the fact that Tim can cook. There's just something about guys knowing how to cook that practically makes me drool. Can't wait for the next chapter! XOXO, DeceptionIsMySpecialty
DeceptionIsMySpecialty 2007-12-29 ch 6,	abuseThis is a really interesting story. I love Tim. He has a quirky sense of humour that I absolutely adore. And I like Anna too, though I think she needs to relax a little. But I'm sure Tim will play some part in that happening. Anyway, great story. Can't wait for the next chapter! XOXO, DeceptionIsMySpecialty

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