Wow, that was an intense story. I was very sad when Suzuka died :( It was quite chilling, not sure I liked the ending. Well, that was the only way it could have ended, for the most part.

Very chilling ending. I liked how you included back stories with the large cast of characters; but each character was memorable in their own way (Tayo was my favorite!). I love the references from the Battle Royale movie you slipped in as well~

Overall, very well written story with gruesome horror. Good job.

Wow this is really good. The only thing is that maybe you should have cut it up a bit so its not such a heavy read. But other than that this is a great story.