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| picket-line 2008-01-02 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so amazing. I swear, you can see the love between both of them. Though, you seem not to put periods or question marks in the dialouge. just telling you. it's good though (: |
| CynicalValentine98 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |
| Quinty 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseWow... This was so beautiful! But it made me so sad :( You're an amazing writer! |
| Utter Madness 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseJesus Christ that was good. It made me cry. Keep it up. you are seriously good. |
| xxily4everxx 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseaww! its a gr8 (kinda sad) sweet story ^^ |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abusethat's so sad!! i love it! it's so sad that it's not even confusing! okay, so it was a little confusing, but if you put in names or something to say who was talking, then it wouldn't flow right. this story reminds me of the poetry i wright. really depressing where someone dies. that is so sad! i love it! |