Reviews for REDONE DON'T READ THIS VERSION!

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give.me.roses 2008-03-10 ch 6,	abuseThis story is great, love it. =] Though maybe you could extend a few more of your sentences, because for me right now the story doesn't flow as well as it could. Ignoring me, can't wait to see how the plot turns out. [s2]
iLone 2008-02-25 ch 6,	abuseThis was great! Sorry it took me so long to review... but when the time comes, how WILL she tell her mom?
Captain Morgana 2008-02-19 ch 6,	abuseAw! I'm so glad Roxanne made the right decision! (I'm uber Pro-Life)
Chiika 2008-02-18 ch 6,	abuseWow.. this is really great. thanks for updating. Keep doing it :) ♥
iLone 2008-01-21 ch 5,	abuseOMFG! I think that says it all. Very good, as usual. I lurvez Twilight.
Chiika 2008-01-20 ch 5,	abuseWow, we're really getting somewhere. Props for the teenage drama :). Maybe there's a song out there called pregnancy.. >] there's gotta be one. Wodnerin' how this will turn out ^_^;;. -- Chiika
iLone 2008-01-14 ch 4,	abuseOMG! Update soon! Haha, nice author's note.
Chiika 2008-01-14 ch 4,	abuseOh yay some updates. I like your writing style. And here I am wondering what happens next. You're a really good writer. And my laptop just busted so I had to come back to this old computer and I find my old story files. Holy crap I should get working huh? Keep up the good work :) -- Chiika
iLone 2008-01-02 ch 3,	abuseGood! That's all I have to say.
JennieMR 2007-12-30 ch 3,	abuse"Moon River, wider than a mile... I'm crossing you in style... someday..." Love Moon River. All the musical descriptions in this story make it quite poetic. The title is original and thought-provoking. Love it. Keep writing!
JennieMR 2007-12-30 ch 2,	abuseI said before- you're a good writer, and I could feel Roxanne's feelings around Dominic, so that is good. But, and this is a personal thing, and I have to voice it- I feel bad for her. The drugs and stuff. Ugh. Please get her out of there. Like I did poor Alice. LOL. OK, so I know some people wouldn't think a thing about this, but to me it's awful, seeing her in the party life. I've known too many people rescued from that scene who are extremely glad to have been rescued, if you know what I mean. So I'll read the next chapter...
JennieMR 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseYou're a good writer, and I like the premise of the story. I'm not into rocker guys much (Wel... ok so there are certain ones who haved turned my head- Sting (cough) Sting)- but I'll keep reading. :)
bagelmoo 2007-12-27 ch 3,	abuseThis chapter was short. :( It made me sad. Because it was short. And also cause it was sad. Stupid men. I like the band name.
Chiika 2007-12-27 ch 3,	abuseOh wow. You're chapters never fail to impress me. It's kinda weird how I you know... stalk u >] (dun worry im 120% safe you'll just see me hanging aroudn near ur windwo at occassisons) I really like it. The plot's awesome. And wow. The description. (dies and holds cucumber XD lmao) You're got a things for song fics right? And you're pretty good at em too. I'm proud of u!! (depsite the age difference cough cough) And you update fast even with that internet connection of yours... well not youre really but ah well.. K i'll stop now --Chiika (cause she's gangster) gets random stuff thrown at her becasue of previous comment
Chiika 2007-12-26 ch 2,	abuselol I was just randomly reading ficitons and I started with you (not to mention I ended with you) Ever since that reply, I think I'll watch you're story a bit. Sounds like fun. I am also getting the idea that I sound like a stalker/oldie :P oldie! Well I'm not... infact i'm 13 years old XD. But lol ah well. I had to log in to do this twisted and sappy excuse for a review. I'm liking it. Seems like good story. You've for some reason made me want to write my own modern romance. Well... I have ONE... but lol XD and the other one is kinda fantasy abnormalish and I gotta work on it a little. So.. I'll make a one shot. There's another one I read here... on my PHONE! Just like yours. I just needa find it so I can review ^_^;; so uh here goes I gues... - Chiika

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