I liked it. It wasn't your best, but I thought it was kinda pretty. Glad your eyes have been opened. (And hey some of us WILL always be here for you, promise )

I love the third stanza... the repetition of I wonder is great.. I also really like the ending

As I was reading it I could hear in my head how the music might sound. My favorite part was "holding hands and starlight nights/ holding dreams with you in sight/ was pointless". The song has a nice, easy rhythm. Good work.

This is a very good song. I love how much emotion is in it. Great work.

Faith

i totally just sang that whole things and wish i new how to play guitar so i could sing it and record it or something haha