|Reviews for In the Lab|
| Tytherpol 12/30/07 . chapter 1
this is incredible.
it's so rich in the interesting formulas you added
the second stanza is my favorite, but it is the one that bothered me most in this piece-too solid, dry, and there are just i guess too many theories associated with ground/air though i adore the "Tongues white as/Gravity" relay you tied with it
i think it's an insanely beautiful stanza...how you worded it.
actually, i just love the thoughts behind the whole piece.
your children stanza is so sharp (neat comparison/contrast thing).