this is incredible.

it's so rich in the interesting formulas you added

the second stanza is my favorite, but it is the one that bothered me most in this piece-too solid, dry, and there are just i guess too many theories associated with ground/air though i adore the "Tongues white as/Gravity" relay you tied with it

i think it's an insanely beautiful stanza...how you worded it.

actually, i just love the thoughts behind the whole piece.

your children stanza is so sharp (neat comparison/contrast thing).

just neat.