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| Spotluver26 2008-05-12 ch 14,  | abuseHey!! Amazing chapter. Write more soon. Oh and randomly saying, brothers are losers thanks spirit |
| -BeeVee-THEEAmazing 2008-05-11 ch 14, | abuseWow, that was great. :] I completely forgot you were bringing Emilio back! What a genius thing you did, I can't wait to see what happens while they're away on vacation. BTW, now I have no clue what's going to happen, I'm done predicting. :P LOVED IT! As always. Toodles! -Bee- |
| misery sister 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseAll numbers from 0-100 should be spelled out. I think you know where I'm referring to. Since English is your base language, I suggest making all the foreign languages italicized, to make us know right away that it's a different language - otherwise, we'd be like "What?" if we start reading it. I'm pretty sure the last paragraph, before the bold text, was part of you author note? It would help if you had the linebreak to separate your story from your AN. |
| Spotluver26 2008-05-10 ch 13, | abuseHEY< great story. Write more soon. thanks spirit |
| -BeeVee-THEEAmazing 2008-05-09 ch 13, | abuseI really think you deserve more reviews. This story is amazing! :] I can't wait to see what happens at the bar. She gonna get ** drunk and kiss him, right?? Haha, I can't wait for more. LOVED IT! As always. Toodles! -Bee- |
| Spotluver26 2008-04-17 ch 12, | abuseYa know, I had to sign in for you. LOL :) ITs ok though. So, great chapter, I'm happy they're making some progress, however its kinda slow, but then again you have forever to get them together and it's a really good story so it's not like I want it to end like next chapter or whatever. THANKS FOR DECIATING(SP?)IT TO ME!! I feel so loved. :p ok, so write more soon and I can't wait to read it. thanks spirit P.S. This is like the longest review I've ever written ... you should be proud. ;) |
| the flaming river 2008-04-16 ch 12, | abusewow! she is really lucky. no wonder the banker was so nice to her |
| -BeeVee-THEEAmazing 2008-04-16 ch 12, | abuseAww, this story is beyond cute! :] I really hope they admit it to each other soon. Gah, it's starting to get annoying that it's taking so long. :P But I'll wait patiently if I must. :P LOVED IT! As always. Toodles! -Bee- |
| -BeeVee-THEEAmazing 2008-04-13 ch 11, | abuseAww, that chapter was awesome! :] Can't wait for the romance! LOVED IT! As always. Toodles! -Bee- |
| Spotluver26 2008-03-18 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter! Hilarious! and awesome, write more soon. Please. Thanks Spirit |
| -BeeVee-THEEAmazing 2008-03-18 ch 10, | abuseI feel like I read part of this before... Hmm, oh well. YAY! Time to kick Emilio out. Can't wait for more. LOVED IT! As always. Toodles! -Bee- |
| -BeeVee-THEEAmazing 2008-03-11 ch 9, | abuseI really like this. Now all you have to do is get rid of the obnoxious Emilio and we'll all be great. :P Update soon though, I can't wait for more! LOVED IT! Toodles! -Bee- |
| Spotluver26 2008-03-10 ch 9, | abuseHey, write more soon and Will and Aly have to end up together! He's so cool! Thanks Spirit |
| the flaming river 2008-03-07 ch 8, | abusethis a really good story. It helps me when I'm down. Update soon! |
| Holiday in Spain 2008-01-22 ch 6, | abuseI like it. I wonder what's going to happen with Emilio... Oo... |