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akrause 2008-02-03 ch 4,	abusewow. getting peed on does not sound nice. lol. i like the story so far. the main character's thoughts make me laugh. they're so personal, too. is this based on you? lol. cool story. :)
Carnivale 2008-01-26 ch 4,	abuseThis whole story is just so funny. I've been LOL-ing the whole time. I love Gabriel. :3 Hehehe. Love it. Keep it up.
Em 2008-01-07 ch 4, anon.	abusehilarious! keep it up!
Aruru 2008-01-05 ch 4,	abuseAww...! Taylor reminds me of Jonathan. =)) Except Taylor has a littler sister who's old enough to talk while Jonathan does not. But still...!! =)) Its so awesome. -- Self-Diagnosed ADD
FireFallon 2008-01-05 ch 4,	abuseOh my god, definately my favorite chapter so far! :P Oh the whole 'tap that' thing. sigh
Unsociably Acceptable 2008-01-05 ch 4,	abuseoh my gosh, i'm practically crying i'm laughin so hard! lol lmao rofl or what ever its called...ect ect oh, lord, so funny!
Thinking Of Raspberry 2008-01-05 ch 4,	abuseHAHAHA "oh hello ground." thats funny. ur humor reminds me of a good friend of mine who writes harry potter fan fiction. its "a fountain pen" check out story, foolish games and settling the score. they're great and they really remind me of ur style. anyway, KEEP UPDATING cuz this story is hilarious and i'd love to see the realtionship btwn tess and the New Guy develop! haha and i love the depth the readers get to the inner workings of tess's mind.
Not Dead Fred 2008-01-04 ch 4,	abuseI swear by all that is hilarious and wonderful, I have a neighbor with creepy lawn gnomes, that one night annoyed the wrong person and woke up the next day with their little decapitated heads on pikes! No lie. My friend Joey has a completely understandable dislike of the things and he got so tired of them taunting him with their tiny creepiness that he...well...lost it...but it was hilarious and my neighbor kept them that way for the longest time... Oh and another thing...Tessa is fan-freaking-tastic! She is good people. ~NDF~
Thinking Of Raspberry 2008-01-01 ch 3,	abuseHAHA omfg this girl is rather sexually pent up - the whole liking her gay friend thing. u kno whats weird.. i know EXACTLY how she feels because i have, sadly and embarrassingly to say (tho i will say thanks to the anonymity of the internet), experienced the DOES NOT COMPUTE feeling of being physically attracted to a gay guy. haha this story has a really special place in my favorites list, since i can relate so well. anyway, one question, what do u mean by "A blind daughter with a colorful language and her best friend using the Jacuzzi to take a bath." The "blind" threw me off. i like ur style of voicing the character's thoughts and propelling the events of the story and the reader together. no block of a narrator in between if u know what i mean. anyway, cannot wait for the next chapter!
big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-01-01 ch 3,	abusehmm... too bad he's gay. and wait, so is taylor cute or not? i'm vaguely confused. i hope he's cute. cute guys are awesome. but, of course, looks aren't everything. i'm not going to be naive and say they don't matter, but they don't always matter. obviously, i'm going to be more attracted to a cute guy than a non-cute guy, at least initially, but i'll always choose the non-cute guy over the cute guy if his personality's better. not that my opinion matters. update soon!
a bitter kiss. 2008-01-01 ch 1,	abuseOh man, I loved how you started with Japan and stuff! I'm so FASCINATED by the Japanese/Japanese culture. My aunt is there for vacation right now, and I was so envious I couldn't go along because of school. I have a Japanese friend and it's so interesting when she brings like... her packed lunch from home and everything's so... Japaneese, haha, even the way she packs it and stuff! Haha, so yeah. Rambling. GReat writing style. :P
Aruru 2008-01-01 ch 3,	abuseHow wonderful! clasps hands together girlishly -- Self-Diagnosed ADD
big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-01-01 ch 1,	abusethis is a highly amusing story. i assume you've gotten that a lot? well, it's very funny. keep it up!
alorattack 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abuseY-you're bloody brilliant. I'm totally fangirling your story! reads on
Thinking Of Raspberry 2007-12-29 ch 2,	abusehahaha excellent chapter, ur mastery of present tense is flawless (i think i've said taht before..) however, the build-up while gabe and bryant were fighting kind of fizzles out, but u caught the reader's attention again by the ending. i cant wait to see bryant throw a fit at tess, & if i may guess, tehre will be some painfully cute boy next door tess immediately likes? or hates? which might be better so then you can build up to them having a hate/love relationship which is always funner than having a perfect mary sue oc. fictionpress sends me emails when u update so update!

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