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| False Alarm 2008-01-09 ch 3,  | abuseBrandon amuses me greatly with his attitude... it almost makes him seem a bit of a snob (don't ask me why that's a good thing). I'm interested to see how George will affect him. George seems very, for a lack of better word, gentle character. I like that. I'll keep my eyes open for the next chapter. |
| portabellaprincess 2008-01-07 ch 3, | abuseGary-Stu? Who is that? I liked the chap. Meeting his family and George. That was an interesting encounter. Please update soon! :D |
| Devil's Playground 2008-01-07 ch 3, | abuseThe description of that nurse was TERRIFYING. Utterly TERRIFYING. And I feel bad for the poor kids in the burn unit. :( If Brandon doesn't go play with them and make them happy NOW I will shank him. >_> Anyways... I like George so far, hehe. He seems very nice. And I like skinny boys. Even if he's skinny from being in a hospital, which kind of makes me a bad person for liking it. Oh well! ^_^ More soon, please!? :D |
| portabellaprincess 2008-01-03 ch 2, | abuseOoh. Those girls definitely do not get along. Can't wait to see him start his community service! :D I liked the text message, that was funny. |
| portabellaprincess 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Good start. I'm excited for Brandon. I believe when Dr. M said that he "too" the PSAT, I think you want to say that he "took" it. |
| Devil's Playground 2008-01-02 ch 2, | abuseHahaha I loved his little mental tangent about Asians and eyes and such. Anyways, Lauren is an annoying hoe and I don't like her. Hmph. And Shahira calling Brandon a midget made me laugh. Is he short? Because that would be really cute. Anyways, I like this a lot! Update quickly, yes?! |
| Devil's Playground 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseAww I like Brandon. He seems cute. Maybe a bit cynical, but still cute, certainly. I love how he was so annoyed about being called down to the office and then he ended up getting all excited, haha. :) Anyways, great job, I'm going to go read the next chappie now! |