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| d666lisa 2008-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent story, very cute. I love oneshots :D |
| x3life 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseaw this was so cute =) |
| emerald 2008-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, that's hilarious and sweet. A fantastic and fun read. |
| CoopersGirl 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusetoo bad it's a one shot - it was super cute! I wanted to read more!! |
| sweet vanilla mint 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseAw... so cute! Great story! You did a good job. :) |
| Tasha Lee 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI love the beginning! I'd have to say it gets a little weak where Collin lists what he's good at, but other wise, great job! |
| Lily Llynn 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseHaha very cute. It got a bit confusing (sometimes it's good to say who's saying what if there's a lot of back-and-forth dialogue) but other than that I really liked this. (: Very glad that xoxluurve added this to our c2. (: |
| luv me like no other 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseaw. this is so swet. lol. i love it so much. |
| Pinkamoo 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseDo you -really- love them sweet pea? Or a you just kidding me? You only submitted one after the other :P Nonetheless, good show there! |
| gulistanlik 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseNice one-shot! The mostly dialogue format also works well. Excellent job. ^_^ And congratulations on being nominated for SKOW! gulistanlik |
| katie valentine 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseadorable, :D and it made me smile! |
| Cherry.SKoW 2007-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseCongratulations! Your one-shot 'Shut Up' has been nominated for 'Best One-Shot'! Keep up the good work! xoxo Cherry |
| Kaede Kitsurani 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseOne shots are fun. =) And good job. |
| GrannyP 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseOh what a cute story! I love the dialogue! |
| Val Skauf 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseaw love it! soo sweet! |