Always with the making me cry!
So emotional, and so sad, and yet so completely beautiful.
Hayley Elizabeth.

Oh wow, that's really sad... I knew she was pregnant as soon as the "grazed her stomach" part though... but yeah, that's really sad Trish, so emotionally grasping...
xox
Saralisa

wow. i really like this and the last line was unexpected. nice. very suspenseful and well written. good work. = )