   nightslight 2008-11-26 . chapter 1lol. That made me smile. Very well stated. |
 Which Mistake am I 2008-03-24 . chapter 1O...so few words but gets the full message across!! I Love It! :) |
 hime1221 2008-01-31 . chapter 1Honesty..pure honesty..haven't seen that in a while. And anyone that can't see that must be lost.
X--hime1221 |
 Bingster 2008-01-06 . chapter 1I like the ending, it made me smile |
| The Purest of the Innocent 2007-12-30 . chapter 1 I'm sorry... |
| sylvia's syndrome 2007-12-27 . chapter 1 Nice work. Not sure that the formatting really did anything meaningful for the poem, though. The italics and underlining didn’t really enhance the message for me. Well done on the whole. |
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