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| iPod 2008-06-29 ch 2,  | abuseI like Mat and Lauren, but i HATE gary! He is such an azzhole! Though i dont know why... :D |
| jaindivya86 2008-06-10 ch 7, | abusehey howcome u keep writing lauren as lindsey again n again.. did i miss smthng? neways nice chap.. |
| lilazndork 2008-05-11 ch 6, | abusegood story! i like theme alot! i hope you update soon! |
| Vengeance I Breath 2008-04-28 ch 5, | abusei lurve this... :D continue continue continue...O_O lol... |
| DeviantlyMental 2008-04-17 ch 5, | abuseDarnit! He didn't kiss her! XO oh well...there's always next chapter...that or I could just talk u into it on aim...either way...haha. Keep up the good work! |
| Kyrina 2008-04-15 ch 4, | abusevery good chapter! please update soon! |
| DeviantlyMental 2008-03-09 ch 3, | abusecol!! |
| Kyrina 2008-01-31 ch 3, | abusenice chappy |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2008-01-30 ch 3, | abuseoh my god!! ur story reminds me of my friend and her crush. exept hes a senor and shes a freshmen but they dont have classes together.and hes like of the skater/bad boy image thing.,, well please update update UPDATE! LOL. please? |
| DeviantlyMental 2008-01-08 ch 2, | abuseNice chapter so far! ^^ I'm really anxious to see how this story turns out in the end! =D keep up the work my friend!! |
| DeviantlyMental 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat story Lindsey ^^, I enjoyed it! And yay, the teacher has the same last name as me!! =D and u made her an art teacher!! Who!! But aw, Lauren doesn't like me...oh well, tis' only a story haha. Anyway, I like ur story so far, it's good and has great potential but the only thing is that it's hard to tell who's talking, try separating the dialog when need be such as: “Lauren, right?” Ms. Yang came by, “can I see your work?” Lauren nodded and handed her the paper. “Well Lauren you have potential to be a great artist. Keep up the good work.” (said or complimented or whatever u want to put-Ms. Yang). Lauren smiled and said thank you. When she was gone Lauren rolled her eyes. Other then that, like I said, I hope you update soon and I'm really rooting for you! (like always haha =D) |